Ignite presentations: Learner response

Pain and Gain- Masculinity:
  • Excellent choice of text and topic- would've been nice to see a picture though !
  • Good idea to put the structure of the presentation there but too much text on many slides.
  • Gender stereotypes and gender roles/ conditioning excellent but could go into more.
  • liking these disorders and issues to the media is good- brings in media effects and the influence on the audience.    
  • delivery is good- not reliant on the notes and not reading from the slides (although still too much text on them). 
  • good to see the institutional context but I would like to see it linked to the text, debate or audience. 
  • What does the representation being fair actually mean mean ? is this a reference to real life events ?
  • i'd like to have seen more discussion or weather masculinity/ media is changing that may have made a stronger ending. 
Q+A:
  •    Good questions on media influence on men. Solid answer and clearly knowledge on the topic and issues.
  • less on media text- one to consider for essay.
  • some answers lack a little depth in the debate- one to address for the essay. But there is clearly good knowledge here. 
2)
 Use this feedback and your own feelings regarding your presentation to self-assess and write a detailed WWW and EBI for your own research and presentation as a whole.   
WWW:
A good choice of text which will then overall have a good debate within my essay.
Furthermore, because this is a good media debate it means that their is going to be much more reliable sources; therefore it has a much more higher significance. 

EBI:
firstly, it would have been better if i had a range of images which in a way made my presentation plain. On the other hand i should have also consider using less text which made it slightly diverted for my audience which meant that they would have been reading the text instead of listening to me. Finally, I could have contributed to a stronger ending and also more of a discussion on weather masculinity is changing due to masculinity.        

3)

therefore within in my assignment i will be discussing who has has the major impact on the younger audience Media effects, family or society. furthermore i will be going in depth on the debate does masculinity have a major impact on the way we are judged by female. Furthermore i will also be going in depth if the media is to blame on why male audiences are being stereotyped in a unfair manner because this factor is moulding the society in a manner that means if your weak your not considered a man. Which means within this assignment i will looking over documentary and  historical texts and analyse them to state what is true or false.  

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